I'm going to start peppering some of the blog with one or two lines from my manuscript...I'll try to do it once a week...I'd love to hear your thoughts as you see them! I'm not going to give you any context, so you'll just have to draw your own conclusions!
Before she could find words to respond, he had led her onto the dance floor and wrapped her up in his arms for her first waltz of the evening. Her first waltz with a man who was not her brother.
As a test, I'm also going to put the line into Google Image Search and see what happens...which probably won't be much!
Not so! The result is at right!